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[nobody0]

Есть на форуме форумчане со знанием адвансед инглиша?

Оцените текст:

Viagra - a pharmaceutical drug, which has a very high efficiency in men with erectile dysfunction. Its action is based on the natural mechanisms of erection, that is, it increases the amount of blood flowing into the penis, and thus cause an erection. Need to take Viagra before sexual intercourse for an hour, its effect begins within an hour or half hour and lasts about 4 hours. Doctors do not recommend taking the drug more than once a day. The drug Viagra is not an "exciting" means and does not increase libido.

Что правильно, что нет. Какие есть косяки и читабельно ли вообще для американца.

[zxc1313]

ТС - автор не хумер синонимайзер?

[benzole]

Viagra is a pharmaceutical drug, which has a very high efficiency in men with erectile dysfunction. Its action is based on the natural mechanisms of erection, that is, it increases the based on increasing the amount of blood flowing into the penis, and thus causing an erection.you Need to should take Viagra before the sexual intercourse for an hour, its effect begins within an hour or half hour and lasts for about 4 hours. Doctors do not recommend taking the this drug more often than once a day.

The drug Viagra is not an "exciting" means and does not increase libido.
Viagra doesn't make you horny nor increase your libido.

[SebSerg]

Сообщение от nobody0

Здесь про цены ничего не было.

Или ты сигу свою пропиарить приперся?

Я никуда не приперался, хамить- лишнее
Советую пробовать читать между строк, это на тему цен

[Lucky-Max]

Ошибки есть, текст не читабельный.

Вариант примера без ошибок:

Viagra is a pharmaceutical drug, which has a very high efficiency in men with erectile dysfunction. Its action is based on the natural mechanisms of erection, that is, it increases the amount of blood flowing into the penis, and thus causes an erection. Viagra is to be taken one hour before sexual intercourse, its effect begins within an hour or half an hour and lasts about 4 hours. Doctors do not recommend taking the drug more than once a day. The drug Viagra is not an "exciting" remedy and does not increase libido.

Теперь этот же пример, но читабельный:

Viagra is a medication characterizing by high efficacy in men suffering from erectile dysfunction. The drug provides natural erection, it means that the drug stimulates the blood to flow to genitals, and consequently, an erection is appeared. Viagra is recommended to be taken one hour before expected sexual activity, it starts working within half an hour and its action lasts for 4 hours. Viagra is not recommended more than once a day. Viagra is not an aphrodisiac and does not increase libido.

P.S: Если необходим качественный контент смотри в сигу.

[nobody0]

Lucky-Max, спасибо.

да и почему мои коменты не проходят на твоём блоге?)

[WebNinja]

да, текст нечитабельный. хотел тоже поумничать, но уже поумничали до меня.

[navai]

Сообщение от benzole

Viagra is a pharmaceutical drug, which has a very high efficiency in men with erectile dysfunction. Its action is based on the natural mechanisms of erection, that is, it increases the based on increasing the amount of blood flowing into the penis, and thus causing an erection.you Need to should take Viagra before the sexual intercourse for an hour, its effect begins within an hour or half hour and lasts for about 4 hours. Doctors do not recommend taking the this drug more often than once a day.

The drug Viagra is not an "exciting" means and does not increase libido.
Viagra doesn't make you horny nor increase your libido.

+1..и не лень тебе было .. я хотел тупо всё зачеркнуть.

[Dagone]

Контент заказывайте у ребят кто этим занимается, то что Вы предложили это никуда не годиться.

[nobody0]

Сообщение от Dagone

Контент заказывайте у ребят кто этим занимается, то что Вы предложили это никуда не годиться.

Это не я предложил, копирайтер один с "2 высшими образованиями" скинул пример своей работы, вот и пытался узнать стоит ли с ним связываться. =)

[vix]

вот пример рерайта с топика армады, рерайтер выложил, как оцените?

Generic Viagra- The Super Drug

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Viagra – the Fantastic Generic Drug

Generic Viagra is assurance retaining remedy for males. Generic Viagra is the prospective drug always. It helps the men to feel confidence in their potency. Still while Generic Viagra appear to be temporary therapy and take care of erectile dysfunction in very capable manner. The exclusivity of this drug is famous for the qualities. Generic Viagra is the best work and the best answer for male’s dysfunction. This drug really will help you.